The story can be further broken down into several categories - these are not set in stone:
- Plot - this is the "what" in a story; what happens to whom, when, why, where, and how
- Characters - who is in the story? Characters are usually human, but they don't have to be.
- Setting (sometimes called World Building) - sometimes the setting is to important, it's like another character
- Tone - as Sebastian said in "Little Mermaid," "I need to set the mood" - what great old movies did with music, writers achieve with words
- Themes - is there an overall theme to the story? It is about love, loss, betrayal, revenge, ambition, greed, indecisiveness, hubris....
- Symbolism - do some elements have a deeper meaning? Do they stand in for something else? Is the snake only a snake, and is the dream just a dream?
- Prose - how does the author put words and sentences together
- Dialogue - is it realistic? Does it add to the story?
- Narrative - is it a page turner? Do you want to read more not just to find out what happens, but because the story is so beautifully told?
Here is one example:
In The Sleepwalker, Chris Bohjalian writes about the mother who has gone missing, presumably after sleepwalking:
"She was, at once, never there and always there, as undeniable yet untouchable as the sky... And so there lived a hollowness in the heart of the house. The three of us were missing the semaphore that was wife and mother. We needed a new language and new rituals, but it was going to take time for them to evolve." (Page 63)
Oh yes, good writing also often includes words one has to look up - like semaphore.
Have you been reading a good book lately? Please share your own examples!
Have you been reading a good book lately? Please share your own examples!
Thanks Katie, good refresher on all the elements necessary for a good novel. I'll have to look up semaphore too...
ReplyDeleteThanks sis! It's much easier to identify the elements of a good story than it is to write a good story, but let's keep trying : )
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